Sound like a fascinating beginning to a story. What time of the year is it? Maybe she is on the hunt for a treasure and she wants to get to it first. Maybe others are behind her and they are trying to catch up with her so she doesn’t get to the treasure first. Or maybe she already has the treasure and she is being chased. Maybe you, as the person walking home from school is either a friend, or just some stranger she passes along this treasure to so it doesn’t fall into the wrong hands. Or maybe I’m just looking at this picture through the eyes of a writer, and see way too much possibilities. What do you think?
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Lolllll I see it in a totally different writer setting, just start being the person heading home and you’ll figure out how this story goes!
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Hey! - just got a chance to view the comments, and see you have a story underway. I don't want to interfere with that in any way, so I'll stay silent, unless you think I might be able to add something. Otherwise, keep going...
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Wow thanks!! Your awesome friend!! 😊
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You're very welcome! We all have hectic schedules, but if you ask anything, I'll respond, even if it's "eventually". But it wouldn't be THAT long...
J: Well this should be interesting. *texts Nitro that he has something to do and then grapples onto the horse and looks behind them* So, what exactly is that?
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May (the rider): What are you doing?! *the horse rears and May trys to calm it*
May: YOU BETTER HOLD ON!!! *she snaps the reigns, and the horse takes off down the street, headed for a dark forest. The sun is starting to set, and the distant roaring behind them is getting closer.*
POV, YOUR WALKING HOME FROM SCHOOL AND ALL OF A SUDDEN A GIRL IN A HOOD RIDING A HORSE RACES PAST…; SHE SEEMS TO BE RUNNING AWAY FROM SOMETHING, WDYD? (RULES IN TAGS)