yeah.
shorten the name of the story, or correct it grammerically'
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its fine. the names perfect
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to you maybe. but to a reader when you're reading a story you want the name to excite you, or roll off your tongue. your name kinda is like hitting a nail through your tongue.
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well how about just The regi's and the chaos of necrozma?
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or is it multiple regis?
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Regice Registeel Regirock ( who died in the story) and Regigigas.
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ooooooooo, okay. so multiple regis.
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how about we get rid of the first The
capitol R
Regi's and the Chaos of Necrozma.
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YES BOI THATS GOOOD
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alr changed it.
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yeah.
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you didn't have to change it, it's your book. just a suggestion