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I THINK IT IS IMPORTANT FOR PEOPLE TO MAKE THEIR OWN CHOICES IN LIFE. LIFE IS ABOUT CHOICE. CHOICE IS VERY IMPORTANT BECAUSE IT IS NOT FAIR FOR PEOPLE TO HAVE TO WORK UNDER HARSH CONDITIONS, FOR LITTLE TO NO PAY. IT IS ILLEGAL TO HAVE SLAVES IN THE UNITED STATES ACCORDING TO THE 13TH AMENDMENT. IT IS IMPORTANT FOR PEOPLE TO CHOOSE WHAT JOBS THEY WANT. ANOTHER THING THAT IS IMPORTANT IS FOR PEOPLE TO BE ABLE TO CHOOSE WHO THEY WANT TO DATE. PEOPLE SHOULD BE ALLOWED TO DATE THE SAME GENDER AS THEM, BECAUSE THEY LOVE THEM. I CAN UNDERSTAND WHY PEOPLE WOULD THINK IT'S WEIRD, BUT IT'S NOT WEIRD AT ALL! LOVE IS LOVE NO MATTER WHAT. IT’S ALSO FAIR AND IMPORTANT FOR PEOPLE TO CHOOSE WHAT GENDER THEY MAY WANT TO BE, LIKE IF THEY DON’T FEEL LIKE THE GENDER THEY WERE GIVEN, THEY SHOULD BE ALLOWED TO CHANGE IT, AND WE ARE. PEOPLE ARE ALLOWED TO CHANGE THEIR GENDER, AND THEY ARE ALLOWED TO CHOOSE WHO THEY WANT TO DATE! IT’S SIMPLY A MATTER OF ACCEPTANCE. IN CONCLUSION, PEOPLE SHOULD BE ALLOWED TO CHOOSE IN LIFE.