Jade’s Gacha template

Hey, can you tell me of my combat actions are clear
*Ren swings the shovel named storm weaver at Leo, Leo swings his katana at the same direction and parries Ren's attack*

It is

Okay, I was just worried if I had to rewrite a whole story

A good way to make sure a story has good actions is read through it and see if any actions are up to interpretation, and they aren’t so simple and general you could see it two different ways. For an action scene close your eyes for a second and imagine it, then describe every little detail.

Ah, I'mma watch the star wars prequels and sequels for the fights

Well that's facts there.
If I didn't have so many writer's blocks. If probably make my rps more detailed.

When I have writers blocks I reuse previous rps

Ah...