Planet Served: Chapter 3, Season 1 (The Broken Wall: Part 1)

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"You'll have to leave at once, It won't be too long until they get here." says Judge Blue. "I don't even know how I'm gonna beat these guys, they absolutely destroyed me the first time I've encountered them." stated Ed. "Maybe you'll find things along your way to help you out." "On my way? Where are you even taking me?" asked Ed. "Here, you'll need this."

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"The hell is this?" asked Ed Fort Liss, looking at the strange object. "That's the dimension hopper, Just point it somewhere and it sends you to a random dimension. Downside is.... There are over 700 QUADRILLION DIFFERENT FREAKING UNIVERSES!"

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Ed pointed the wand at a random area within the white void and the wand fired off a blast that opened a portal to another dimension. The dimension appeared to be some sort of cyber space-like area with ones and zeroes all over the place.

(6) A different portal then opens up, differently shaped than the ones opened up by the wand. Mr. Kickass and the rest of the crew emerge from the portal. "FOUND YOU... AFTER 11 F**KING YEARS I'VE FINALLY FOUND YOU!"

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"11 years? it's only been a couple minutes though." Ed said in a confused tone of voice. "There is no time! Quick, Run!" Judge Blue pushed Ed into the portal and waved to him "I believe in you my derpy friend."

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"What is this place?" Ed fort liss walked around the strange place. He noticed that he was walking on a path to somewhere, but where does it lead?

(9) Ed came across a giant computer with some sort of search engine. "What is this?" The search engine suddenly typed in "what is this" into the search bar. "hmmmm, Search for McPlanet's!" The computer searched for McPlanets, but there were no results. "Wha-?" the same portal opened up behind Ed and the Kickass Krew emerged from it. "GUN!" a gun appeared in Ed's non-existent hand.

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Ed shot at Mr. Kickass with his gun, but of course, it did nothing. "Bullet's. Won't. Work... Dumbass." Mr. Kickass and his crew began slowly walking toward Ed. "NOWHERE TO RUN NOW!" yelled Cotton Candy Man. "Ugh, Yes there is! "SEARCH, ELDRITCH MONSTER!" Ed Fort Liss, made a portal behind himself and ran though it.

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-Archie's throne room-

Sizzizzetter slithers into Archie's throne room. It's been 11 years since Ed's disappearance. "Archie.. May I have a word with you please?" asked Sizzizzetter. "If this has something to do with my food being overpriced then screw off!" yelled Archie. "It isn't.. It's about Ed. His disappearance was your fault. don't you feel at least a little guilty for that?" a silence filled the area, then Archie suddenly started to laugh.

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"HEARTLESS!? He's the one who's taken everything from me! He deserved everything coming to him! I've never been happier to see him gone! Now get out of my sight before I have you hanged! you worthless serpent.." Archie's worker dragged Sizzizzetter out of the building.

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Sizzizzetter pulled out a picture of him and Ed standing together. "Please come back Ed... I need you..."

My god Sizzizzetter is adorable.

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"I think Demon Man just died..." Stated Dorito Man. "YA DON'T SAY YOU BLABBERING DOLT!" Shouts Mr. Kickass. "How are we going to get out of here and survive this monster thingy? And more importantly, how are we going to track down Mr. Ed Fort Liss? We're gonna need a tracker or something." Mr. Kickass suddenly got and idea. "Riiight.. Tracker..... SEARCH, EXTRA-DIMENSIONAL ED FORT LISS TRACKER!" Suddenly, an improved version of Box Man's tracker appeared in Mr. Kickass' hand. Mr. Kickass grew an evil, diabolical grin.

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Ed ended up in a strange series of rooms. "Oh god, where am I now?" Ed began to aimlessly walk around until a portal opened up and the familiar stickman began to emerge from it.

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"You're really dang stupid if you think you can escape me THAT easily.." Mr. Kickass said as he walked through the portal. He holds up the tracker and shows Ed that he is being tracked.

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Dorito Man and Cotton Candy Man surrounded Ed so he wouldn't escape. "We'll be takin that wand now you effortless nut." Threateningly stated Cotton Candy Man. "WHAT IS THAT THING!?" Scribble man shouted, pointing at a creepy, smiling monster in a room across from them.

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The entity lunged at them and dragged Dorito Man down the hall. "OH GOD NO!!!" Ed quickly made a run for it. "You idiot! he's getting away! Here, take the tracker and the pencil and get Dorito Man back! I'm going after Ed Fort Liss!" Scribble Man began to chase after Ed fort Liss as he ran down the endless halls.

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"Ed Fort Liss! Ed Fort Liss!! Give me the wand!" Scribble man was running behind Ed at high speeds. Ed Fort Liss turned around still running in the same direction and sprouted a hand just to flip him off, and then opened a portal to another dimension, hopping inside of it.

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Scribble Man hops through the portal along with Ed and started punching him on the way down to the ground below.

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Ed Fort Liss managed to safely land, while Scribble Man ended up landing flat on his face. "Time to get out of he- Wait, where's my wand?"

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"YOOHOO, OVER HERE!" The tree was staring at Ed while it was holding the wand in one of it's hands. "Hey! Give it back!!" Ed said while walking closer. "COME AND GET IT!" The tree started to giggle as it sprouted legs and started running away.

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Meanwhile Dorito Man finds the wand in the maze. "Aha, I've got it! wait- crap, where am I!?" Said Dorito Man, lost in the maze.

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"Uhh.. Maybe this way.?" Dorito Man began to move randomly throughout the make. Soon then, he suddenly turned blue. "Wha- What's happening??" He heard a faint "WOCKA WOCKA WOCKA" approaching him. "OH GOD!" Dorito man threw the wand out of his hand and went the other direction.

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Ed Fort Liss found the wand on the floor. "Aight, time to get out of this hell hole." Ed opened the portal and went on inside.

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Cake slammed the arcade cabinet with his invisible hand. "This game is a f**king ripoff! I want my money back!! It's full of bugs! My character even disappeared for crying out loud! Cake flipped over the entire arcade machine and stormed out the building.

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Ed ended up in a dimension with a giant brick wall with the number 4 on it. "Well, this place is useless." He said as he tried to open another portal, but nothing happedned. "What?" He tried again and again, but nothing happened. "You've gotta be kidding me!"

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"End of the line buckaroo..." Scribble Man said as he emerged from his own portal. "You have taken this far enough, killed off Box Man, Square Up Man, Demon man, and now Emoji Man! and now you're next! We are going to rip you to shreds!" Scribble Man and the other Kickass Krew members were ready to attack.

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Bones broken, eye missing, covered in his own blood, beaten down into a pulp. "As it should be... Ed Fort Liss.." Scribble Man and the rest of his crew began to walk up to Ed.

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"I'll admit.. You're skilled.. But not skilled enough." Scribble Man kicked Ed into the wall at full force, destroying it in the process and sending into another dimension where the battle would continue.

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"GIVE ME THE WAND!" Ed ran at the tree with his fist in the air, but the tree was faster.

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The wand flew out of Scribble Man's hand and opened another portal and falling inside of it in the progress. Scribble Man and Ed look into the portal knowing that they'll have to go in. "I hate you..."

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(26) "What on earth is this Pac-Planet game? I've never even heard of it before." Cake went up to the arcade machine and inserted a coin to start the game.

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"Oh, this is one of those shitty Pac-Man clones, might as well play it to see how bad it is."

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"You guys are back? Took you long enough. And why do you all look like that?" Scribble man asked as he looked at them with a confused look on his face. "You look like some sort of ghost too y'know." replied Cotton Candy Man. "Well, can I at least have my pencil back?" Origami Man proceeds to hand over the pencil. "Can we go home now? I think I'm done." said Dorito Man. "We came here for a reason... To kill that derpwad asshole.."

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"What the heck did they do to the ghosts?" Ed Fort Liss began to move around uncontrollably "I can't control... HELP!" Ed would turn wherever cake would turn the joystick, the only ones who have control in this situation are the kickass krew and Cake.

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Ed began to move forward endlessly eating small planets. Ed made a turn and there was Cotton Candy Man. "No where to run Eddie boy!" Ed turned around and Emoji Man was there too.

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Ed suddenly ate a big planet and suddenly all of the ghosts turned blue. "SCATTER!" Cotton Candy Man and Emoji Man began to float away from Ed. Ed chose to chase after Emoji Man "This cake guy is and idiot. You're not supposed to touch the ghosts!" Ed thought as he involuntarily went toward Emoji Man.

the chapters just keep getting better and better

Random question but do you care if I make one (or technically multiple) OC(s) a planager?

Go ahead, That would be cool to see

Oh yeah that reminds me
I gotta redesign my planet king employee

And the McPlanet's one too

i already did that one

i really like the galaxy tail

here he is, krystallegion!

Also random question

What do most planagers think of the Eldrian Family

Wait why am I even asking this

Ed Fort Liss: enjoys their support

Archie Nemesis: just likes their money

Yoo Ziless (New character): He just sees them as other passerby

Red Fort Less: sees alt universe versions of them, so I don't really know

Drasille: knows about only one of them and created a bootleg of them. Let's hope he doesn't find out about the others. that would be absolute chaos. The Kickass Krew is already deadly enough

Which one does drasille know about?

probably wave because origami man

Wave isn’t apart of the Eldrian Family

But he is a target of them

Oh, guess none of them then

Let’s still hope he doesn’t know about the existence of Blaze or the 6 black hole/star siblings

Oh f**k I think Galaxycube is gonna snitch on someone to Drasille

Ok I should have asked this two days ago but eh

Is there any specific requirements for one?

The only semi-requirement is that they change form/appearance when they reach a certain size, but that's not really a must-have

Oh I made the Planager lmao

It’s been almost two weeks

Wanna see it?

He’s pretty ugly but eh

What's their name & restaurant?

They don’t have a name yet but

They run in and out planet

Alright

They also usually have dumb names based off of a real insulting word

Ed Fort Liss = Effortless
Archie Nemesis = Arch Nemesis
Yoo Ziless = Useless

I might just make a planager myself

I’m thinking of the name Doarak (Play on dork)
Restaurant could be planet bell

Planager baby name generator:

Ed Fort Liss
Archie Nemesis
Yoo Ziless (Even though he isn't really a planager)
Doarak
Beth Eddic
Poynd Liss
Reah Tarrad
Stew Pidd
Dom Bass

I’m laughing so hard at these names

Also archie nemesis feels different as it feels more evil than insulting,as it provokes a feeling like you could not be friends with him, he will be your arch nemesis

also archie is kind of an evil name

True, but it also means that he has no say on his own morality, meaning Omni just created him to rival Ed as his only purpose

So drasille didn’t make the planagers?

He definitely could make planagers if he wanted to, He did make the Kickass Krew after all

His lore confuses me

I have confusing characters too
Like geomageddon

Where did he come from?
I actually know and i plan on telling the story

Does red fort less have any employees?

Nope, but i'd imagine is employees would look more scary and demonic than average

I found the original bio for drasille
imgflip.com/i/4q2d20

The bio says other people copy him, when in actuality he copies everything else and claims it as his own

The lore thickens

Can i just say you come up with the most hilarious stories

Yes, This one goes into the comedy genre because funni character design, names, and artstyle

Also *insert me trying to find and old family tree I made for Omniworld gods just to see what the heck Drasille actually is*

So all the known planet places are
Mcplanets
Planet king
Galaxy fried planets
in and out planet
Planet bell

These are the known employees
Mcplanets:Ed, galaxycube, big
Planet king:Archie, krystal, solar
Galaxy fried planets:Red
In and out planet:????
Planet bell:Doarak

We need employee designs

Yoo Ziless is a new employee for McPlanets

The Kickass Krew is technically a business too, which is why Drasille is called a planager