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Kiren: not how I wanted to spend my day... *enters the woods

Anna: You should come to the village

Kiren: ok

Anna: It’s safe there

Kiren: ok... Ill go

Anna; *starts walking*

Kiren: *folleos

*they reach a makeshift village*

Kiren: well alright

Anna: Welcome to the the village

Kiren: cool, was this built by people in here?

Anna: Yep

Kiren: ok

*She sees a bird, and a squirrel, this forest seems to have wildlife in it*
*do they bring the bag?*

*yeah*
Kiren: Well... better then just being help captive and farmed for never melting ice

*footsteps*

Kiren: who there

Kiren: who are you

Anna: My name is Anna

Kiren: uh, I’m kiren

Anna: *small smile*

Kiren: .\,

Anna: Nice to meet you

Kiren: nice to meet you too?

Anna: :)

Kiren: are we safe here?

Anna: Of course

Kiren; okay

Anna: So what do you like to do

Kiren: welllll I did like swimming

Anna: Ouch

Kiren: wut

Anna: Nowhere to swim here

Kiren: oop ok

Ghost: ugh *walks to the forest*

Anna: No

Ghost: why tho what else do we do

Anna: Survive and don’t get captured by wivin

Ghost: so nothing fun to do

Anna: Not in particular

Ghost: *sigh* what is even in this forest

Anna: There is the village

Ghost: do they have wivins in it

Anna; Of course not!!! Any wivin that tries to get into our village is killed on the spot

Ghost: they won’t attack me will they

Anna: Not unless you are a wivin

Ghost: ok let’s go *smiles*

Anna; Eh, good point I guess

Ghost; so how do I get out

Anna: You can't

Ghost: of course *opens his bag*

Bag contents: Protein bars (4), bottles of water (5), dagger (1), blankets (1), match (1)

Ghost: ugh most of this is useless

Anna: What do you mean?

Ghost: nothing *walks farther into the forest*

Anna: Just the usual then

Ghost: what do I do here…. Kill people?

Anna: *follows* what’s in your bag?

Ghost: just the basic stuff needed for survival

Tillie: Anna went hunting

Ghost: oh ok I totally wasn’t worried

Tillie: Anna can handle herself

Ghost: yeah I know

Tillie: -.-

Ghost: WHAT

Tillie: Huh

Ghost: never mind *sits on the floor* are you sure she’ll be ok

Tillie: She does this every day

Ghost; oh ok then I’m umm also going to go hunting *goes into the woods* Hey Anna are you in here

Anna: People here date by hunting together and stuff, there aren’t restaurants here. There aren’t movies, this isn’t the outside

Ghost: oh…… that sounds boring

Anna: *shrugs* I was born here sooo

Ghost: oh yeah you never got to know what the outside is like

Anna: Never will

Ghost: …you don’t know that

Anna: *taps her collar* Everyone born here gets one chance to escape, I blew it

Ghost: what do you mean

Anna: It’s impossible to escape once you get a collars

Ghost: what age did you get the collar

Anna: 12

Ghost: oh….

*some ways away from the village, is this girl leaning against a tree and eating honey, the wings are not visible*
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Ghost; umm hello who are you

??: *looks up* That depends, who are you?

Ghost: *holds the knife infront of himself* im ghost

Mellow: Well nice to meet you Ghost, I’m Mellow

Ghost: umm can I see your eyes

Mellow: *shows her wingless back* I don’t have wings, so I can’t be a wivin

Ghost: THEN SHOW ME YOUR EYES *walks close to them*

Mellow: *backs up a little* Personal space please

Ghost: show me your eyes *reaches for there hair*

Mellow: Those don’t matter, all wivin have wings so I can’t be one

Ghost: *gets even closer* I will move your hair myself if you don’t

Mellow: *slaps his hand away* Has anyone ever told you that you where incredibly rude?

Ghost: I need to know if your a wivin or not!

Mellow: I’m not! *her ears twitch* All Wivin have wings

Ghost: you probably cut your wings off *holds the knife to their chest*

Mellow: Gross! Why would anyone do that?

Ghost: to hide the fact that your a wivin so people trust you and then you can back stab them

Mellow: You do realize wivin take people by force, right? .-. They just attack you out of nowhere

Ghost: I- yeah…. *lowers the knife*

Ghost: what do you want

Mellow: To not have a knife pointed at my chest?

Ghost: *puts the knife away* now leave

Mellow; Excuse me?

Ghost: I said leave

Anna: Tillie you buffoon
Tillie: Careful or I’ll roast YOU over the fire as punishment
Anna: Uuh hu

Ghost: *walks back out* umm what do I do

Tillie: Don’t offend me or I’ll roast you over a fire
Anna: That’s starting to get old-

Ghost: umm is there like a job I can do

Tillie: You could collect some firewood or go hunting

Ghost: umm I’ll go hunting *grabs a knife and walks I or the woods*

Anna: Wait!

Ghost: *stops* what

Anna: *nods*

Ghost: ok bye *walks deep in the forest* where are the animals

Anna: Wivin have eyes with no whites and wings, their eyes are all one color but the more powerful ones have pupils

Ghost: oh ok if I see that I’ll run

Anna: Um, not that I’ve seen

Ghost: ok then……. Where’s tillie

Anna: Hunting, why?

Ghost; oh umm no reason

Anna: I’m her second in command if you have any questions -.-

Ghost: n-no I don’t

Anna: Okay

Ghost: is there like a restaurant or something

Anna: *raises an eyebrow* A friend?

Ghost: mhm yeah

Anna: No

Cooper: asking for a friend do people date here

*They sees a bird, and a squirrel, this forest seems to have wildlife in it*
*do they bring the bag?*

Ghost: *grabs the bag* I just want to get this over with

*footsteps*

Ghost: who’s there *looks around*

Ghost: who are you

Anna: *quickly pulls a dagger out before looking at them and relaxing* Holy crab you look almost exactly like a wivin

Ghost: umm sorry I guess

Anna: I’m Anna

Ghost: my names ghost

Anna: Nice to meet you

Ghost: I wouldn’t say this has been nice

Tillie: Oh, hello
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Ghost: oh sorry

Tillie: It’s fine, *she smiles* I’ll just have to roast you over the fire tonight as punishment

Ghost: w-what *stumbles back*

Tillie: *chuckles*
Anna: You have got to stop scaring the new people
Tillie: *pats him on the shoulder* Don’t worry I was only joking

Ghost; *blushes* oh ok

Tillie: *pokes his nose*

Ghost: *blushes even more* I uhh

Anna; -___- right there *she points a house*

Ghost: *walks into it still blushing*

Tillie: *giggles*

Ghost: ,.. Anna where is your house

Mellow: *crosses her arms* Why?

Ghost: I don’t trust you

Mellow: *sits back down at her tree* Then you leave and let me eat my honey in peace, I was here first

Ghost: fine bitch *walks away*

Mellow: I’m not the one attacking random people! Sheesh

Ghost: shut up

Mellow: Like seriously, what did I do to you?

Ghost: I said shut up *slashes the knife cutting there hair*

Mellow: *easily slips out of the way before they can* Oh so now you are stabbing at me! *she pulls her own dagger out* Fun fact, everyone here is armed

Ghost: STAND STILL

Mellow: So you can cut my head open?

Ghost: no so I can cut your hair

Mellow: So I’m just supposed to let some random stranger whip their dagger at my head

Ghost: now let me cut it *tries again*

Mellow: No. *in one swift motion she is behind him and her dagger is at his neck*

Ghost: ugh *tries to tackle them*

Ghost: *tries to tackle her-8

Mellow: *to strong*

Ghost: Tillie, Anna, someone help me!

Mellow: I’ll let you go if you promise to stop attacking me :/

Ghost: only if you show me your eyes

Ghost: show me your eyes and I’ll stop

Mellow: You aren’t in a negation position, and when people who attack me want something I don’t give it to them

Ghost: *walks away* I hope a wivin catches you

Mellow: I wouldn’t wish that fate on anyone.

Ghost: *walks back to the village ignoring her*

Ghost: yes

Anna: What do you mean?

Ghost: like would it be better to move there

Anna; All the villages are about the same

Ghost: oh….. do you have Christmas

Anna: What’s that?

Ghost: one day of the year everyone gives gifts and stuff

Tillie: Christmas is for people who have enough to give

Ghost: oh h-hi

Tillie: Hello -.-

Ghost: I uhhh

Tillie: ?

Ghost: would you umm want to go hunting with me

Anna; I tried and failed to escape.

Ghost: …*hugs her*

Anna: ..

Ghost: have you ever had a hug

Anna: Well yes

Ghost: so your life isn’t all sad

Anna: I’m not some charity case. My life is fine

Ghost: I’m sorry

Anna; .

Ghost: ….does everyone live in the village

Anna: No, some people choose not to and there are two other villages

Ghost: are they better

Anna: *smiles back*

Ghost: *walks to the village with anna*

*it’s a makeshift village with people milling around it*
(You delayed the response by deleting your comments -.- I respond to the last notification)

(Sorry I’m impatient and dumb)
Ghost: woah

Anna: Mhm

Ghost: umm where can I stay

Anna: You can stay with me until a house is built

Ghost: oh thanks

Anna: No problem

Ghost: why are you being nice to me

Anna: *sheug*

Ghost: *walks and accidentally bumps into someone*

(Ghost is kinda in the wrong on that one)

Ghost: umm where is tillie and Anna

Anna: Right here

Ghost: oh umm I didn’t get any animals but I did find someone that was hiding there eyes

Anna: Did they have wings?

Ghost: I don’t think so

Anna: Okaay

Ghost: I still think they might of been a wivin

(Okay- Dude wait at least until the comment is an hour old before chasing it)
Anna: Wivin have the wings and the eyes

(Sorry I’m really bored and I’m just laying in my bed with nothing to do)
Ghost: is that it

(Watcha atomic shrimp on YouTube)
Anna: Yep

(Ok sure)
Ghost: oh…. Have they ever cut off there wings

Ghost: is there any wivins without wings

(That was kinda the point)

(Yeah I know)

Tillie: Maybe tomorrow

Ghost: o-ok *happily walks away*

Tillie: -.-

Ghost: *goes inside Anna’s house* hmm is there anything fun in here

*two sleeping bags, food and water stores, burning gear*

Ghost: she was right it’s nothing fun *lays down*

*next day?*

Ghost: *yawns* good morning Anna

*she isn’t outside*

Ghost: Anna where are you *searches for her*

*she isn’t there+

Ghost: *panics* maybe she went to hunt *runs outside*

Hunting*