Kool, I think that you would probably want to describe 000-1 more, and you might want to put an addendum at the end that's not in the description for test logs and cross-tests
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Alright, I think I'm bad at writing because I don't really spend reading SCP documents from the wiki.
4/10. It's supposed to be written in the 3rd person, and it is not supposed to be put in a specific time as to when it was written. There are also a few grammatical errors, and scps should be referred to as "it" until the sex of it is confirmed.
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New to SCP writing, I will use this feedback later to remember this, thank you for your feedback.
And, by the way, otherwise it's really good! You got the classification correct, at least for the most part, and the "XK End of The World Scenario" sounds like a real SCP in that manner.
SCP-6700
"The angry dog" (updated); Thaumiel; 7 layers of metal and led. SCP-6700 is a dog that is 3 meters tall and 4 meters wide, he was found on XX/XX/XXXX, glitching and attacking some type of thing, the thing then disappeared, the dog then looked at us, saying [REDACTED] in a very distorted way, MTF was called, putting the dog in a cage and bringing it to its cell, 3 days ago, a Class-D was tested into SCP-6700's cell, with SCP-02856, SCP-02856 teamed up with SCP-6700, breaking their containment cell and almost causing an XK end of the world scenario, luckily, MTF found the current location of SCP-6700 and SCP-02856, putting them back in their cell. 3 days later, SCP-6700 has been tested against multiple harmful substances and acid, none effect SCP-6700. A few days later, SCP-6700 has been put in SCP-173's containment cell, SCP-6700 looked at SCP-173, then after a while, he started glitching and growling, SCP-6700 then glitches behind SCP-173, shapeshifting to a SCP-6700-1, then toppling it over, shapeshifting back to its normal form. SCP-6700 was then forced into its cell.