YOU HAVEN'T MADE THE CHANGES I SUGGESTED; THE CHANGES YOU SUGGESTED ARE IMPOSSIBLE. AND, I HAVE INCLUDED SOLID JUSTIFICATION FOR THE DATA COLLECTION TOOLS I HAVE CHOSEN; I DON'T CARE WHETHER YOU HAVE INCLUDED SOLID JUSTIFICATION OR NOT, JUST DO AS I SAY; TO HELL WITH WHAT YOU SAY; FROM NOW OWN YOU ARE GOING TO SUPERVISE YOURSELF AND GRADE YOUR OWN PAPER