My first creepypasta! Figured Entity could use some stardom.

This creepypasta (so that you understand this) there are teenagers at a party with a young girl. A message appears on the wall that says: "There is a murderer among you. [The little girl] will be taken." Everyone resolves to protect the girl, but then, people start getting murdered, with confusing evidence against many different people. Everyone starts fighting, and the monster walks off with the little girl in tow.

Im writing mine im done with the rough draft and here is the character

For...?

His story Pirate_Melon helped but im almost done

I was thinking of using an OC called entity. Hes the black dude, and hes pretty scary.

hes like slenderman, yes?

Not exactly. He is scary, but he isn't that evil. He doesn't kill the little girl in the creepypasta. Just kidnaps her. He does have tentacles in his back like slender, but he is entirely black. No tuxedo, just blackness.

ah can you tell me the story and i'll tell u mine

It's up there. Top of the comments.
At least, the basic Idea.

well... no. But I'm working on it.

Do u have a complete story