you can still see the lines through the paper- oof- (layer 1 ) Layer 2 is a metallic mess I need feedback on this layer

VeRy gOoD, shading is pretty good, everything is all good, just you might want to redraw it on a paper with no lines so it looks better uWu

thank

Welc

here is some cool music, Hope ya like it! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2z_ESg4U-4g

cool!
This is what I listen to while I draw:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Laru6kzj7VY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ldlifMS0nE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_mb4D2RPRs
Lmao

as you can probably tell

I like jazz