It’s a lot better, but the green clashes with the other colors. The skin is a little weird*, and I think you should draw it on paper, cause you can’t get natural shapes from computer shapes. The ears are sort of stuck out and the earring/headband aren’t naturally set, but that goes back to the “unnatural computer shapes” thing. I’m no perfect artist myself**, and I’m probably never gonna use a computer for art, but this is still pretty good in my (slightly perfectionist) opinion.
-Vin
*she looks a bit like she has jaundice
**Im not even close to perfect (I’m terrible) -w-

Thanks! I like it better on paper, too but using my crappy computer makes it look more bright and it doesn't have a bunch of eraser marks.

Eraser marks give it a sense of real-ness (this is just my paper-and-ink traditionalism talking, if I start ranting about things like this, ignore me).

Ok :)

😉

I have a curse..that I wake up very early everyday for now on somehow.

Same

I have a curse... that I will go to bed at six AM and wake up at two every day from now on somehow

So yeah, I have a curse. But when there’s a curse, there is a blessing.

That's a nice way to think about it

My curse is to not sleep at night.